Well everyone, The time has finally come. At long last, I have finished my final assignment for my social journalism class. How does it tie in with my writing, you ask? It is a picture slideshow of the main characters in my latest book. For your viewing pleasure, may I present, The Five Crowns:
Justin,
I love your video! The music is gorgeous, what is it?
Good job.
By: jessolwen on March 4, 2008
at 10:44 pm
Hi Justin!
So it’s unfortunate that there was miscommunication regarding this assignment. I think you’ve done a good job but ultimately it’s not what I was looking for.
The audio you recorded (narration) doesn’t go along with your photos very well… in fact I’m not sure that it’s narrating them at all but rather talking about your book in general? Which makes it confusing for the viewer. Also, the interview was to be the central part of the project and here it feels like an afterthought to be sure.
Too bad because I’m certain that if we had been clear at the outset you could have put something really great together!
That said – this is a great music/photo slideshow but it just doesn’t fit the requirements of this assignment.
On this assignment I’m giving you a 3/6.
It’s been a pleasure having you in class. Good luck with your book!
Roz
By: mohawkonline on March 8, 2008
at 4:19 pm
Damn that sucks dude. Haha!
By: Dude on May 28, 2008
at 5:54 am